Front Cover Incompleted

This is my Front Cover which i will be using to my place my model. I need to capture the right image so my model is placed in the right position. I have planned to place my model on the left hand side. I will use a black backdrop so the colours do not create an uneven contrast.I tried to create a very aggressive,stern affect by using a military type text. as it relates to the hip-hop/rap image i will try to bring to my magazine.I expect this effect to mainly draw in male readers but as well as females.The bright red and white could be useful or drawing in anyone as it is very eye catching.The word 'featuring' in italics is different to the rest of text,making it stand out,making it clear that this is the cover star.