What is here looks good. Perhaps splitting into cover, contents and DPS would help but you do cover a fair amount. Less talk of using case studies and more of HOW would be good, so masthead, coverlines, layout, language, following conventions such as price, date line, bar code etc.. Amy
What is here looks good. Perhaps splitting into cover, contents and DPS would help but you do cover a fair amount. Less talk of using case studies and more of HOW would be good, so masthead, coverlines, layout, language, following conventions such as price, date line, bar code etc..
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